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Yemi

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  1. DENIED I have decided to deny your application. Reasons After reviewing other applications, your applications seem to lack some details in certain areas. After taking some time to read through, your formatting seems to contain a lot of spaces which can make it hard for the reader. Someone already has a shop that sells the items you are stating to sell Thank you for applying for the business faction.
  2. ACCEPTED I decided to accept your application. In order for setting up your roles, I will DM you regarding your application. Thank you for applying for the business faction. Welcome to the community!
  3. ACCEPTED I have decided that you a wonderful fit for a business owner and your idea is unique. In order for setting up your roles, I will DM you regarding your application. Thank you for applying for the business faction. Welcome to the community!
  4. ACCEPTED Thank you for applying for business owner. I will send you a DM on discord regarding your application and setting up your roles. Thank you for applying for the business faction. Welcome to the community!
  5. PENDING. I am not sure whether I want to deny or accept your application. Listed below are the reasons I have decided to place your application in pending. I like the concept of having a roller-skating rink, it gives a bunch of roleplaying opportunities for characters to connect and enjoy. The theme you have going on is wonderful and different. Your application is unique. Your application lacks detail. Describe the employee roles for a better understanding and how much they are going to make on average. (A percentage) Spoiler your images for a clean finishing look. If you'd like to add events to your application, please do so! During this time period you can change anything within your application.
  6. DENIED Listed below are the following reasons on why I have decided to deny your application. Your application lacks detail in areas where detail is most necessary. Your business does not fit my standards. It's too small with little to no employees. Make sure next time to spoiler your images to make your application have a clean finishing look. Your application format is very off-putting. Thank you for taking your time to apply for the business faction.
  7. Pending. I have decided to place your application on pending. Listed below are reasons on why. Certain questions should contain more detail than others. Spoiler the images so your application looks clean. Your application should have more length to it. The formatting is very neat and easy to read. (Not including the photos.) I like your business idea it brings be excitement. Great menu/food idea. I will review this application once more before deciding whether I should accept or deny you. You are free to make any changes during this time period. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  8. Pending. I have decided to place your application on pending. Listed below are reasons on why. Your application contains a lot of detail. Certain questions should contain more detail than others. Your application is lengthy and contains good detail. The formatting is very neat and easy to read. I enjoyed reading your application. I will review this application once more before deciding whether I should accept or deny you. You are free to make any changes during this time period. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  9. i have fans yay
  10. me im best
  11. me
  12. Pending. I have decided to place your application on pending. Listed below are reasons on why. Your application contains a lot of detail. Certain questions should contain more detail than others. Make sure not to use italics for your whole applications. Some parts are with and without it. Your application is lengthy and contains good detail. The formatting is very neat and easy to read. I enjoyed reading your application. I will review this application once more before deciding whether I should accept or deny you. You are free to make any changes during this time period. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  13. Pending. I have decided to place your application on pending. Listed below are reasons on why. The application formatting is a little off. One question that was on the format was not answered. Some questions in your application should have more detail. Your application is very clear to read and also neatly placed. The overall idea of your business is very cute and I think it’s a very good idea. Your overall application is wonderful. I will review this application once more before deciding whether I should accept or deny you. You are free to make any changes during this time period. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  14. Pending. I have decided to place your application on pending. Listed below are reasons on why. You have some grammar mistakes but it's nothing major. The application formatting is a little wonky. (Questions should be in bold.) Some questions in your application should have more detail. Your application is very neat and clear to read. (Excluding the grammar mistakes and formatting wonkiness) The overall idea of your business brings me excitement and has me hooked. I love that you added a bunch about your character. Your application makes me happy. I will review this application once more before deciding whether I should accept or deny you. You are free to make any changes during this time period. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  15. Accepted! Your application has been accepted. I was meant to do this a lot sooner. Dm me to get your role and to discuss things for your shop! Thank you for applying for business owner.
  16. Denied. I have listed some reasons on why I have decided to deny your application. This application is very hard to read; only the questions should be in bold not your answers. This application lacks detail where detail is NEEDED. Format your application neatly and correctly. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  17. Denied. I have listed some reasons on why I have decided to deny your application. This application lacks detail in the places where detail is NEEDED. The backstory takes most of the space for this application. (The back story is more than enough.) Your business cannot be within any criminal activity. Please make sure your application is formatted correctly. Thank you for applying for business owner.
  18. Accepted I meant to do this a lot sooner I like how you formatted everything making it look very neat and pleasing to the eye! Though the backstory should be in the application, you sent me it within dms and it looks great!
  19. accepted. you are allowed to build your restaurant
  20. i simp over shadow. 

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